Young Man graduates high school and wants to be successful.
Gets a job in a local real estate office.
Works hard and gets to be local manager.
Moves to big city and works harder.
Becomes Junior Partner.
Asks pretty secretary to marry: she accepts.
They buy their dream house and have many smart, loving, healthy kids.
Finally pass away in their 90s, happy Grandparents.
The End
Why is this story boring? What does it lack?
Use Obstacles and...
Fix it.
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